The Undoing

Painted into corners

Many hands on the brush

Options narrowed

Managed

Pointed toward anonymity

Automatically debited

Casually credited

Directly deposited

Increasingly obligated

Invasively secured

Collectively herded

To some dark and bloodless conformity

NO is the answer

Less really is more

Defiance is mandatory

To unwind the web

Around each of us alone

And all of us together

To begin to dismantle

A status quo

Bereft of all sense

And find new freedom

Here in the Undoing

Sounds like you have a lemon on your hands.

Sounds like you have a lemon on your hands.

An unexpected (and kinda funny) response!

I like what you wrote...and agree with the sentiment....

Thanks.

Here's one of mine recently spat out onto the virtual page.

The Thief

I stopped

and stood for you

pockets turned

inside out

just lint

frowning

desperate

you are

your hand

pressed to my heart

backed into bricks

but a lottery

was won

Edited December 1, 201213 yr by ocnblu

Good stuff, Ocn.

Glad to see you posting things at FM.

Thanks man.